Thursday, February 19, 2009

haiku

packing boxes on my own,
moving house on tuesday--
too much to take, too little

2 comments:

Ralph Murre said...

That last line may be the best I've read.

Bruce Hodder said...

Thanks Ralph! I liked it too. Have a look at the next poem up when you have time. I'm really pleased with it, and I'm not usually...